Wednesday, 30 March 2011
Tuesday, 29 March 2011
Monday, 28 March 2011
'The Wounded Teapot' Final Animatic
An updated and better timed animatic. :D
Story Ideas: Music - Warren Covington 'Tea For Two'
Absolutely love this piece of music. The musical build up starting at 2:10 is perfect for the anticipation of the teapots jump and the end to that build up fits perfectly for the end realisation that the teapot has failed. All in all a very useful piece. Enjoy!! :D
Sunday, 27 March 2011
Saturday, 26 March 2011
2D Animation: The Limp
So its taken me a few hours to figure out but I think the limping cycle has worked out so far in terms of the key frames. All in all I think those agonising three hours trying to figure this out has payed off! :D
Initial attempt at Key Frames |
Second attempt at Key Frames |
Final Four Key Frames |
Thursday, 24 March 2011
Limp Cycles
I've been having trouble trying to create a limping walk cycle so I thought it was time to find some videos to help...
Wednesday, 23 March 2011
Tuesday, 22 March 2011
Animation Timeline
Winsor McCay
Winsor McCay was an American cartoonist and is considered to be the father of 2D animation. Starting out in 1911, McCay created his first animated film Little Nemo, an adaption of his famous newspaper comic strip Little Nemo in Slumberland. McCay started the revolution of animation and following on from the success of Little Nemo, he went on to produce more animations including How a Mosquito Operates in 1912 and his most recognised animated film Gertie the Dinosaur in 1914. Jeff Lenburg said:
“McCay finally achieved real success in 1914 with Gertie The Dinosaur (also called Gertie The Trained Dinosaur), generally regarded as the first “cartoon star”.” (Lenburg, 1991:45)
While John Canemaker described it as:
“… a masterpiece of early personality animation.” (Canemaker, 1996:14).
Gertie was considered to be a landmark for 2D animation, not only because of the number of frames McCay had used to create the animation, but because he gave the dinosaur a personality, something that had never been seen before. Gertie is truly a classic animation making an example of brilliant animating style and technique that would later inspire future animators such as Otto Messmer. The animation runs very smoothly and is an all around masterpiece in the infancy of animation.
In the same year Gertie was released, the First World War had started. It was during this time that McCay stopped animating. That is until towards the end of the war however as McCay made another animation the 1918 The Sinking of the Lusitania. This animation was the first of its kind because it was based upon the real sinking of the British Civilian liner Lusitania, by the Germans. This animation of McCay’s was different from his previous due to it being used as propaganda against the Germans. Howard Beckerman says:
“Made as a document of the attack on a defenseless civilian liner by a German U-boat, it is decidedly intended to incite emotions, and use animation as both newsreel and a wartime propaganda statement.” (Beckerman, 2003:19)
The Sinking of the Lusitania is a very moving piece of animation and beautifully put together, depicting the deaths of hundreds of innocent people. It is easy to see how this might have incited emotions against the Germans at this time. The music is complement to the animation that adds to the horrific imagery setting a perfect mood.
Lotte Reiniger
Lotte Reiniger was a German animator and film director who focused on the use of silhouettes as forms of entertainment. From an early age, Reiniger became fascinated with silhouette puppetry, a Chinese art, and from this would go on to love cinema, particularly Geroges Melies’ and Paul Wegener’s films and their use of special effects.
Reiniger’s fascination with silhouette puppetry and performance is easily understandable. Her animations met with great success because the art form was rarely used in the western world.
“Lotte Reiniger utilizes the ideal technique, the silhouette film.” (Arnheim, 1997:141).
Reiniger became one of the first animators to use silhouettes to great effect and as such it became a landmark in the world of animation. Her animations had a certain charm and fairy tale quality to them particularly in her Cinderella animation.
The Cinderella animated short was made in 1922, a decade after Winsor McCay’s first animation. It is an excellent example of Reiniger’s animations. Everything is beautifully crafted making the characters and scenery vey distinguishable. All of the designs even those that look simple are rather complex and Reiniger has accounted for the movement of her characters by creating moveable limbs. The fact that the piece is a silhouette also makes it hard to distinguish certain objects from each other when due to a lack in colour and depth.
The animation is very flat. Although nicely composed and designed the animation itself is a little rough. Some movements are clunky and slow, unlike other 2D animations of the time where they ran smoothly and at a good pace. The animation also conveys the personalities of the character, defining them from their movements and actions, rather than sound and appearance.
What is interesting is that because of the silhouettes, Reiniger opens her animation up to interpretation.
“…in Reiniger’s monochromatic stories, the images allow space for the viewer’s imagination to fill in the gaps.” (North, 2009)
The animations have no colour or depth to them, nor much a sense of time, which allows the mind to play the animations, giving characters and scenery colour and appearance as well as a time that could the piece could be set in.
Norman McLaren
Norman McLaren was a Canadian animator known for his work for the NFB (National film Board of Canada). McLaren experimented and produced a multitude of animations during his career all of which made him a pioneer of many new ideas in the world of animation. McLaren experimented in an array of media creating something visually stunning and creative.
“His early experiments in animation included actually scratching and painting the film stock itself…”(Konczewski, -)
“Norman McLaren's short film is a cinematic study of the choreography of ballet. A bare, black set with the back-lit figures of dancers Margaret Mercier and Vincent Warren create a dream-like, hypnotic effect.” (NFB, 2009)
This piece is a cinematic masterpiece. Using held and copied frames McLaren creates the effect of emphasizing movement, which created something beautiful to look at. The posses and movements are smooth and fluid to a point where it could seem unnatural, touching upon dream like projection. The use of back lighting creates a defining emphasis on the dancers giving them slim form.
Considered to master of 2D animation, Walt Disney was one of the most successful animators of his time and made landmarks in the industry. Disney was one of the first animators to bring sound to an animation after the silent era of film was slowly diminishing with the release of the Jazz Singer. His first animated short Steamboat Willie, which surfaced in 1928, was a massive hit and lead on to huge growth in animation.
“…Disney tried an experiment on a group of his colleague’s wives. From outside a window, he projected a cartoon sequence about a mouse on a riverboat. In another room, his colleagues made a valiant attempt to perform synchronized sound effects and music.” (From Pencils to Pixels, 2003)
In the years following Steamboat Willie, Disney began employing other animators and went on to produce some of the first coloured feature films, such as Snow White. This was a major breakthrough in animation that set the bar for rest of the industry. But Disney didn’t stop there. 1940 saw the birth of Fantasia, an animated film composed of various short animations with a symphony orchestra playing along side it.
“As the curtains part, a huge symphony orchestra appears hazily, on the screen. Before it steps a thin, grinning, bald-headed man. He introduces himself as Deems Taylor, welcomes the audience, on behalf of Leopold Stokowski and Walt Disney, to "an entirely new form of entertainment." (Time Magazine, 1940)
Fantasia is probably one of Disney’s most recognised animated films and definitely one of the most beautifully composed. Up until its release nothing so ambitious had been done before, but the results are fantastic. In terms of animation, it is brilliant. The animations are typical of Disney, moving fluidly and without flaw. Each animation has its own musical track and everything in those animations responds to the music in terms of movement, actions and moods.
“A 1940s attempt by Disney to combine the "high art" of classical music to animation…” (Empire Magazine, 2008)
Characters tend to be inanimate objects, all of which are brought to life by Disney, who define their characteristics with movement and actions rather than facial expressions and words.
The Brothers Quay
The Brothers Quay are American stop motion animators born in 1947. Many of their stop motion shorts use puppets that are typically malformed and damaged, and are usually pieced together from children’s dolls. The influences they use for each short vary, but most derive themselves from novels and music.
“Filtering arcane visual, literary, musical, cinematic and philosophical influences through their own utterly distinctive sensibility, each quay film rivets the attention through hypnotic control of decor, music and movement, evoking half-remembered dreams and long-suppressed childhood memories, fascinating and deeply unsettling in turn.” (BFI, -)
The shorts tend to be rather dark in nature, something that has become characteristic of the quay brothers’ work, which becomes something unsettling and creepy. One short film that achieves this very well and perhaps one of their most famous is the 1986 Street of Crocodiles.
This stop motion short is based upon the novel by Bruno Schulz with the same title.
“Rooted in the writings and drawings of Bruno Schulz, 'Street of Crocodiles' is an excursion into the cruel, absurd world of middle European surrealism. It uses a gnomic, fragmentary narrative to explore a mood of terminal frustration and compulsion, with an astonishing display of sensual and visceral textures, suggesting twentieth century terrors lurking at its edges. The film blends disparate materials to create a fantastic world where everyday materials become strange.” (Moving History, -)
Jiri Barta is a Czech stop motion film animation director who is well known for his use of characters and sets made from hand-crafted wood. Perhaps one of Barta’s best-known stop motion shorts is the 1985 Krysar (The Pied Piper of Hamelin).
“The strange world Barta manifests to the viewer in Krysar is both dark and astonishing. Other than the rats which invade the town, the film is performed exclusively by puppets moved by means of stop motion animation. While these puppets are sometimes roughly carved, they are all well conceived and remarkably affecting. Many exude a peculiar cruelty, and most are, at least, vaguely sinister. Moreover, the town these beings inhabit is just as bewitching as are its denizens. Composed of various impossible, warped structures, not unlike the nightmarish village of Robert Wiene's The Cabinet of Dr. Caligari, it provides a consistently effective setting for the dire events the director depicts.” (Allen, 2005)
It is easy to see how Robert Wiene’s The Cabinet of Dr. Caligari has influenced Barta in Krysar. Everything in the world of this film is twisted, deformed and abstract from anything that we would consider to be normal. This in turn reflects on the characters within the film. Although the citizens appear to be civilized as expected, their true natures are revealed soon enough. Everything runs on the ideals of greed and gold in the film, from banquets to trade, showing just how twisted the characters become. This in a sense puts Barta’s world in the realm of the dark and sinister, but also reflects on the urges of greed people have in reality. Krysar could be seen as an outlet of greed for Barta. His characters, although rough, are nicely defined and are key to implanting the ideals that Barta is trying to convey through this piece.
Bill Plympton
Bill Plympton is an American animator and former cartoonist director and producer. Plympton, like other animators before him, has made his mark on the world of animation with his fascinating contributions to the industry. Plympton has a very unique and refreshing style of animation and story telling that conveys his weird and wonderful world. Beginning his career in animation as early as 1968, Plympton has created a vast array of fascinating animation shorts and films, his first truly successful short being the 1987 Your Face.
“The story is kind of my story,” Plympton says softly. “ I used to imitate other artists. I never became successful until I began to do my own stuff.” (Goldberg, 1992)
Carrying on from the success of Your Face, Plympton continued his career in the animation industry, and in 1992 created his first featured animated film The Tune.
“Plympton animated The Tune entirely by hand with over 30,000 drawings. The Tune is classic Plympton, with his rough sketch-like drawings and famous metamorphosis segments in which one object transforms magically into another.” (Andresen, 1992)
It took Plympton a total of two years working alone to create his first feature animation but it certainly paid off. The film met with huge success receiving very positive reviews from critics. And it is easy to see why. Plympton’s style of animation is very cute and kiddy using generally light and cheery colours and rounded shapes, but retaining a somewhat mature nature, ideal for all ages. His animations are always on the move (or so it seems) as even when a character or object remains motionless, the sketchy lines from each frame depict otherwise. They do this as well as remaining true to the form of the character or object, animation at its most natural. Metamorphosis plays a large part in Plympton’s animations. Nearly everything can change form, making his worlds weird and wonderful to look at. Plympton uses this as a tool of progression. Rather than change the change a frame entirely, he rearranges what he already has into something he needs for the next scene.
“At first glance, you wouldn't peg lanky, laconic Bill Plympton as the kind of guy who likes to electrocute people. Or squash them, burn them, and blow them up. But don't let that innocent, boy-next-door look fool you. When it comes to cartoon violence, Bill is an innovator on a par with Tex Avery and Bob Clampett. His characters swallow and inhale each other, and like to bite one another's heads off one chomp at a time.” (Segall, 1996)
Raymond Briggs
Raymond Briggs is an English cartoonist and illustrator best known for his animated film and book The Snowman in 1978. Briggs’ work has become popular amongst a wide audience of children and adults alike, for his beautifully created characters and stories. His style of illustration is soft and pastel making it something perfect for children’s books of which he authors, but it is this quality that defines Briggs as an artist and it would be hard not to recognise his work. The Snowman, one of Briggs’s earliest works is perhaps one of his most well known pieces and an animation of early testament to the illustrator’s own artistic style.
From the success of The Snowman came the book As The Wind Blows. Rather than focus of producing a children’s narrative this book based itself upon the threat of nuclear war and has been a topic to stick with Briggs since its creation. In 1982 another animation adaption of Briggs’ work materialized based on As The Wind Blows. The animation explored the event of a nuclear attack in England, focused on an elderly couple attempting to survive the aftermath. The art style again pays homage to the style of Briggs with soft colours.
Pixar
One of the leading animation companies in the world, Pixar is at the height of the animation world. Since the companies’ creation in 1979, Pixar has created vast numbers of animations that we know and love. Although the company started out small, it grew quite quick with collaborations from Disney and in 1984 the first animated short The Adventures of Andre and Wally B was released. This short was groundbreaking in animation because it was one of the first CG animated films to be produced. Following on from the success of The Adventures of Andre and Wally B, Pixar went on to create more and more CG animations and became one of the most respected companies in the industry for it. In 1995, Pixar produced it first CG feature film Toy Story, which became a huge hit.
“Disney's 1995 animated extravaganza came with a gimmick: this was the first ever full-length computer animated feature. In the wrong hands this could merely have been a novelty stretched to film length. In the more than capable digits of computer wizards Pixar and director John Lasseter, however, the result is triumphant.” (Westbrook, 2005)
To pick one point from many about Pixar’s animating is the way in which they create a character through their actions rather than words. The 2008 release Wall-E is a prime example of this. Although the main character Wall-E, a rusting rubbish robot, never speaks (save for one or two words) his personality is conveyed as a warm hearted and caring individual. In this instance, Pixar has created something from practically nothing. Machines are considered emotionless but that wasn’t good enough. Through Wall-E’s warm heartedness and caring personality Pixar tells his story, which is nothing less than success.
“It works; this is Pixar's most enthralling entertainment since Nemo. A science-fiction epic that starts off as a smart twist on the last-man-on-Earth plot and veers into a fable about humans' overreliance on technology, the movie should connect with audiences of all ages because it stars the most adorable little trash-bot ever.” (Corliss, 2008)
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Saturday, 19 March 2011
Thursday, 17 March 2011
Monday, 14 March 2011
Research: An Influential Teapot
So while I'm making more tweaks to my story I thought I'd share some nostalgic gold in the form of one of the most influential animated teapots I could think of.
Mrs. Potts from Disney's Beauty and the Beast is just the kind of influence for teapot animation I need.
Her walk cycle is much more of a jumping or hopping cycle. The character has only a single 'foot' as it were and as such her movement has a somewhat similar appearance to a rabbit or kangaroo.
The walk cycle I intend to use for my teapot is going to be more bipedal in manner, having the base of the teapot curve up in the middle so as to create two makeshift feet. I was thinking something along the lines of the brooms from Fantasia.
Sunday, 13 March 2011
Story Ideas: Music and Sound FX
I'm not quite sure what I want to do for this but for some reason every time I think of the teapot jumping the Indiana Jones theme starts blasting inside my head. Again I'm not sure not sure this would work well, perhaps there is another theme that might be more suiting for this.
As for the rest of the animation I was just thinking of using simple sound FX. I want to keep them simple but recognisable for what they are.
Story Ideas: Round 3
Making some more tweaks to the story...
The teapot is sitting on a shelf on a crockery cabinet, bored from months of inactive use. It is covered in a light layer of dust and covered in scratches and fractures. The teapot lets out a sigh. Moments later a commotion begins in the same room as the teapot. Plates, cups and bowls on the shelves around the teapot are quickly whisked away, leaving the teapot sitting alone. Wondering where everything has gone and interested to see what all the fuss is about, the teapot looks up to find a multitude of cakes and fancy treats laid out on a decorated table opposite it. Looking around the teapot notices a box of teabags amongst the lay out. Making the connection between the decorations and foods, the teapot realises that a tea party is soon to take place. The teapot decides to it wants in on the action and blows the layer of dust from itself.
Limping toward the edge of his shelf, the teapot jumps down onto the cabinet surface below, adding a small fracture to its base. To its dismay however it can go no further because of the distance between the cabinet and the table. The teapot is determined however, and assesses the situation. Looking around it finds nothing of use and comes to the realisation that jumping is the only way to progress. The teapot limps a few steps back and tries to jump with a running start.
As the teapot gets in the air, it feels like it might actually make it. Soon enough though, it notices it hasn't travelled very far, only being no more than a foot from the cabinet. Due to its wound induced limp, the teapot couldn't run particularly fast to cover the distance and thus falls, smashing on the floor. Several months later the teapot is sat back on its shelf, having been crudely glued together and covered in dust again. The teapot tries to clear off the dust and in the process the lids handle snaps off. The teapot sighs and the scene fades.
Getting better but I think the ending is a little weak. Help and advice would be appreciated for the ending though!
The teapot is sitting on a shelf on a crockery cabinet, bored from months of inactive use. It is covered in a light layer of dust and covered in scratches and fractures. The teapot lets out a sigh. Moments later a commotion begins in the same room as the teapot. Plates, cups and bowls on the shelves around the teapot are quickly whisked away, leaving the teapot sitting alone. Wondering where everything has gone and interested to see what all the fuss is about, the teapot looks up to find a multitude of cakes and fancy treats laid out on a decorated table opposite it. Looking around the teapot notices a box of teabags amongst the lay out. Making the connection between the decorations and foods, the teapot realises that a tea party is soon to take place. The teapot decides to it wants in on the action and blows the layer of dust from itself.
Limping toward the edge of his shelf, the teapot jumps down onto the cabinet surface below, adding a small fracture to its base. To its dismay however it can go no further because of the distance between the cabinet and the table. The teapot is determined however, and assesses the situation. Looking around it finds nothing of use and comes to the realisation that jumping is the only way to progress. The teapot limps a few steps back and tries to jump with a running start.
As the teapot gets in the air, it feels like it might actually make it. Soon enough though, it notices it hasn't travelled very far, only being no more than a foot from the cabinet. Due to its wound induced limp, the teapot couldn't run particularly fast to cover the distance and thus falls, smashing on the floor. Several months later the teapot is sat back on its shelf, having been crudely glued together and covered in dust again. The teapot tries to clear off the dust and in the process the lids handle snaps off. The teapot sighs and the scene fades.
Getting better but I think the ending is a little weak. Help and advice would be appreciated for the ending though!
Saturday, 12 March 2011
Story Ideas: Round 2
Having a second crack at creating a story for 'The Wounded Teapot'...
The teapot is sitting on a shelf on a crockery cabinet, bored from months of inactive use. It is covered in a light layer of dust and covered in scratches and fractures. The teapot lets out a sigh. Moments later a commotion begins in the same room as the teapot. Interested to see what all the fuss is about, the teapot looks up to find a multitude of cakes and fancy treats laid out on the table opposite it, surrounded by decorations. Realising that a social gathering is soon to take place the teapot decides to he wants to be involved. Limping toward the edge of his shelf, the teapot jumps down onto the cabinet surface below. To its dismay however it can go no further because of the distance between the cabinet and the table. The teapot is determined however, and assess the situation. Coming to the realisation that jumping is the only way to progress, the teapot limps a few steps back and tries to jump with a running start. As the teapot gets closer to the table, it begins to lose height, falling only inches from the tables edge. The teapot smashes on the floor. Several months later the teapot is sat back on its shelf, having been crudely glued together and covered in dust again. The teapot tries to clear off the dust and in the process the lid handle snaps off. The teapot sighs and the scene fades.
Feeling happier about this version! Still trying to keep it simple because simple is good (sometimes). Still feel it needs a few tweaks though.
The teapot is sitting on a shelf on a crockery cabinet, bored from months of inactive use. It is covered in a light layer of dust and covered in scratches and fractures. The teapot lets out a sigh. Moments later a commotion begins in the same room as the teapot. Interested to see what all the fuss is about, the teapot looks up to find a multitude of cakes and fancy treats laid out on the table opposite it, surrounded by decorations. Realising that a social gathering is soon to take place the teapot decides to he wants to be involved. Limping toward the edge of his shelf, the teapot jumps down onto the cabinet surface below. To its dismay however it can go no further because of the distance between the cabinet and the table. The teapot is determined however, and assess the situation. Coming to the realisation that jumping is the only way to progress, the teapot limps a few steps back and tries to jump with a running start. As the teapot gets closer to the table, it begins to lose height, falling only inches from the tables edge. The teapot smashes on the floor. Several months later the teapot is sat back on its shelf, having been crudely glued together and covered in dust again. The teapot tries to clear off the dust and in the process the lid handle snaps off. The teapot sighs and the scene fades.
Feeling happier about this version! Still trying to keep it simple because simple is good (sometimes). Still feel it needs a few tweaks though.
Thursday, 10 March 2011
Story Ideas For 'The Wounded Teapot'
The first ideas for my story...
- The teapot is sitting lonely on a shelf. It hears a commotion and looks up to see another teapot sitting on the table opposite it. It decides to try and get to it but the gap between itself and the table becomes an obstacle. The teapot assess the situation, but realises the only effective way the cross the gap is to jump. With a running start the teapot jumps from its shelf. It successfully makes the jump but as it approaches the other teapot it finds it won't move or interact. Coming to the realisation the other teapot is not living like itself, the teapot becomes upset. (Emotional Wound)
-An alternative is that the secondary teapot is living but rejects the primary teapot. (Emotional Wound)
- Another alternative ending is the teapot failing to reach the table, falling and breaking on the floor, resulting in its disposal. (Physical Wound)
The problem I keep finding with this story is that it is not exploring a practical goal for a teapot, rather it is going off into a crockery based love story. I feel it should be exploring its designed function which is to hold and pour tea, or at least have the teapot aim to do so. Perhaps the teapot could have a goal of being involved in an event that it believes its services are required such as a social event or party
It's also not exploring the 'wounded' nature particularly well. Having an emotionally wounded teapot at the end of the story just doesn't feel like a strong ending. Perhaps it should be 'wounded' from the start and become more so as the story continues.
Just a few ideas to consider...
- The teapot is sitting lonely on a shelf. It hears a commotion and looks up to see another teapot sitting on the table opposite it. It decides to try and get to it but the gap between itself and the table becomes an obstacle. The teapot assess the situation, but realises the only effective way the cross the gap is to jump. With a running start the teapot jumps from its shelf. It successfully makes the jump but as it approaches the other teapot it finds it won't move or interact. Coming to the realisation the other teapot is not living like itself, the teapot becomes upset. (Emotional Wound)
-An alternative is that the secondary teapot is living but rejects the primary teapot. (Emotional Wound)
- Another alternative ending is the teapot failing to reach the table, falling and breaking on the floor, resulting in its disposal. (Physical Wound)
The problem I keep finding with this story is that it is not exploring a practical goal for a teapot, rather it is going off into a crockery based love story. I feel it should be exploring its designed function which is to hold and pour tea, or at least have the teapot aim to do so. Perhaps the teapot could have a goal of being involved in an event that it believes its services are required such as a social event or party
It's also not exploring the 'wounded' nature particularly well. Having an emotionally wounded teapot at the end of the story just doesn't feel like a strong ending. Perhaps it should be 'wounded' from the start and become more so as the story continues.
Just a few ideas to consider...
Wednesday, 9 March 2011
Research: 'Wounded'
So before I start developing story ideas I just wanted to explore the definition of my characters characteristic, that being 'wounded'.
wound
–noun
wound
–noun
1.
an injury, usually involving division of tissue or rupture of the integument or mucous membrane, due to external violence or some mechanical agency rather than disease.
2.
a similar injury to the tissue of a plant.
3.
an injury or hurt to feelings, sensibilities, reputation, etc.
(From http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/wound)
So to sum up, the word 'wounded' can be applied in 2 key ways:
- First is the breaking or penetrating of the tissue (or in the teapots case, its exterior) which can be seen as Physically Wounded
- Or, to insult, be unfair or cruel, causing harm to feelings, etc. which can be seen as Emotionally Wounded